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engang i mellem skriver jeg lidt historier... jeg er lige begyndt på en engelsk en... det er første gang jeg skriver engelsk så der er nok nogle stavefejl... her er den....

“She’s perfect” Everybody says, but what about what she think? Do they even care about her? Would they cry if she left? She had so many different feelings… She was in love with the most charming boy in the school! She loved hem but he didn’t even looked special at her. She loved her family and her friends! She didn’t have a lot of friends; her only escape from life was through music… She was not good at school! Her math teacher didn’t like her; she hated school… most because that the only subject at school she was good at was English. The only reason that she liked school was because of her two best friends and of course because of the sweet boy… he kept sending her those eyes and that beautiful smile. She felt so special when he did that to her… but she knew that he did that to all the girls, she hated to go to sleep in the afternoon… She was scared, but why? She had nightmares and she was afraid that one of her family members would die… She already lost two family members and it was the hardest thing she’d ever going thought, and she miss them every day. Every hour. Every second. Every night when she was about to go to sleep she had pictures in her head about booth of her family members there’s death… She saw it. She was there all the night and she saw it all, no matter how much everybody tried to hide it to her. The last thing she told herself before she falls asleep was “Tomorrow will be better” And she believed that.


skriv meget gerne hvad i syntes om den og om i vil have mere! smiley


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  • #1   22. nov 2013 Lyder fin, forstår dog bare ikke denne sætning smiley She loved hem but he didn’t even looked special at her.

  • #2   22. nov 2013 nej.. jeg syntes også selv at det lød dumt så jeg slettede det smiley


  • #3   22. nov 2013 Har ikke læst den endnu, men synes du skal dele den op i "afsnit" så gør det den mere læselig smiley

  • #5   23. nov 2013 her er lidt mere...


    . When she woke up she looked in the mirror, she saw herself… She tried to smile to herself, but she gave up. It was so hard to smile when she felt so much pain! After looking in the mirror she goes to bath, she took a washcloth and tried to scrub of the pain… it didn’t worked. After taking a bath she brushed her teeth, she didn’t ate breakfast cause she had no appetite in the morning, then she putted a lot of make up in her face to hide that face she thought was ugly. Then she biked to school she was one of the first people in school, she could just stay at home but her family drive to work early and she’s afraid of being home alone. The cute boy is always in school when she comes, he looks at her again. She looks at her scheme, her first subject is math. She are sitting on the table until her best friend comes… the clock is ringing, now she’s going to have math. In the start of the year she loved her math teacher, but then he became so mean. She didn’t saw a reason in math…and most of all she could not figure it out, she tried! And tried, and tried! She maked 10 tasks… The teacher looks at it and says “That’s wrong!” She only maked 2 tasks right, she started thinking about one of her family members… He was teacher in a lot of subjects, math to. She started thinking about hem… He would be so disappointed if he saw that the was so bad at math. She felt like she was about to cry, but she never cries! She didn’t even cried to her family members funeral… The rest of the day took long time; she couldn’t stop thinking about math.


  • #6   23. nov 2013 Der er nogle stavefejl rund omkring, og så hopper du i tiden og nogen af dine sætninger er "for danske" forstået på den måde at du har oversat direkte til engelsk uden at bytte rundt på ordrene smiley
    Men ellers en god historie smiley


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